Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follow drawing. In your essay you should
1) Describe the drawing briefly,
2) Explain its intended meaning, and
3) Give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20poims)
参考范文
Do you sill remember the good old days when we sat at a table, chatting, joking and laughing? If so，we may now deem it a regret to sit in the same restaurant，typing messages or browsing webs by mobile phones, without any conversation with friends at the same table. In the picture, these four young people are demonstrating us the sorrow-concentrating on the messages from the screen but ignoring face-to-face communication among friends.
The cartoon endows us a heavy understanding that mobile Internet terminals, the technology invented to draw us near, actually set us apart. Ten years ago, we were desperate for a way, such as a visual mobile phone, to skim through news going on in the world, or to hear the voices or see the images of friends who were oceans apart or of strangers who were appealing to us. Nowadays, with the development of mobile Internet communication, the way we longed for is around us, presenting all the messages before us. However, these messages cut off our communication with people who sit next to us.
It is not the technology o be blamed, bu the way we use it! That is, we should use it reasonably. Admittedly, mobile Internet communication is valuable because of its convenience and efficiency. Too much indulgence in the message or leisure it supplies, nonetheless, may separate us from the real social surroundings. Therefore, we should remind ourselves and people around not to get lost in the mobile digital world.
写作思路：
一. 审题立意
要求
（1）描述图片
（2）阐释含义
（3）进行评论
二. 布局成文
总体框架：
开始段 3-4句
1. 引入话题
Do you sill remember the good old days when ...
2. 描述具体图片细节
In the picture, ...
3. 可补充图片底部说明文字
Under the picture lies a caption: ...
中间段
阐释含义 4-5句
1. 主题句
The cartoon endows us a heavy understanding that ...
2. 展开论证，今昔对比
Ten years ago, ...
Nowadays, ...
However, ...
结尾段
给出评论 3-4句
1. 总结利弊
Admittedly, mobile Internet communication is valuable because of ...
Too much indulgence in ... may separate us from the real social surroundings.
2. 提出看法与建议
Therefore, we should remind ourselves and people around not to ...
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