Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follow drawing. In your essay you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20poims)
参考范文
As can be seen, love between a mother and a daughter is reflected by the drawing: in the left one, a young and amiable mother is holding one hand of her little daughter, while in the right photo, when the mother is aged, her daughter, who has grown up, is supporting her, just as the mother did thirty years ago.
Just as the caption below summarizes, the implication conveyed in the picture is self-evident: we need to show our concern and love to our parents. However, most of us fail to do this job. As our pace of life gallops along, increasingly our society is seeing a decline in traditional moral values. It is revealed in the fact that we always put back filial piety. As young men now deem the career as the priority, they often choose to migrate with their jobs, and work around the clock, leaving parents in empty-nests. Besides, many people are used to substituting their care for parents with money or gifts. While it is beyond dispute that material support can improve our parents’ living standards, what these aged people need most is the company and love from us, such as a simple call, or a short time at home.
It is easy to draw this conclusion that, to our parents, nothing can be better than filial piety form children. Whenever possible, we should gather around the table for a “reunion dinner” with our parents; whether busy or not, we need to give our parents a call and tell them we are fine. Only with our awareness of caring our parents with gratitude can our parents lead a really happy life.
写作思路：
一. 审题立意
要求
（1）描述图片
（2）阐释含义
（3）进行评论
二. 布局成文
总体框架：
开始段 3-4句
As can be seen, ... is reflected by the drawing:
先描述左侧图片，再描述右侧图片。
in the left one, ...
while in the right photo, ...
中间段
阐释含义 4-5句
1. 主题句
Just as the caption below summarizes, the implication conveyed in the picture is self-evident: ...
2. 展开论证
It is revealed in the fact that ...
Besides, ...
结尾段
给出评论 3-4句
1. 概括总结
It is easy to draw this conclusion that ...
2. 提出看法与建议
3. 包装结尾，展望未来
Only with our awareness of ... can ... lead a really happy life.
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