Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follow drawing. In your essay you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20poims)
参考范文
As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that many people, old and young, men and women, are siting in front of a computer and surfing online in a gigantic “web” that is separated into many small cubicles. The caption in the drawing reads: “The Internet: near or far”.
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that the Internet as a communication tool has both its advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, many people hold a view that Internet makes us closer than ever before. With the development of science and technology, computers and the Internet are playing an increasingly important role in our daily lives. We can achieve immediate communication via E-mail, QQ, MSN or ICQ. On the other hand, others argue that the Internet weakens relationships among people. It can be easily spotted that some people may chat with strangers online for hours, but may refuse to talk to their families or friends face to face for even a minute.
From what has been mentioned above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that the Internet may draw us nearer, but could also set us further apart. Therefore, it is necessary for us to use the Internet in a reasonable way and take prompt initiatives to eliminate the negative effects concerned. Only in this way can we take advantage of the Internet and live in a more harmonious society.
写作思路：
一. 审题立意
要求
（1）描述图片
（2）阐释含义
（3）进行评论
二. 布局成文
总体框架：
开始段 3-4句
1. As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that ...
2. 描述具体图片细节
3. 补充图片底部说明文字
The caption in the drawing reads: ...
中间段
阐释含义 4-5句
1. 主题句
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that ...
2. 展开论证
On the one hand, ...
On the other hand, ...
结尾段
给出评论 3-4句
1. 总结看法
From what has been mentioned above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ...
2. 提出建议
Therefore, it is necessary for us to ...
3. 包装结尾，展望未来
Only in this way can we take advantage of ... and live in a more harmonious society.
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